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These are quotes
of good passages from first-year seminar portfolios (class of 2004). They have been approved by the authors for use
on the webpage. Aliza Fones: Along with the shock
of realizing the quality of writing that was required, came the aftershock
of realizing the quality that was expected.
Last minute efforts wouldn't hack it, and that was made clear form
the beginning. However, effort
was rewarded and the writing process greatly facilitated my proposed methods
of writing and research. An example
of that was out semester research project; an assignment that sounded
daunting at first, but in actuality would be blissfully easy to write. Stacy Schaenzer: As Shakespeare once
put it in his play As You Like It,
"All the world's a stage, and all the men and women are merely players; they
have their exits and entrances, and one man in his time plays many parts." (Act
II, scene iv) This quote sums up the
focus of my first-year seminar class, Theater Appreciation. We learned all the behind the scenes details
of the theater, what makes a good performance, and how to be a critical
reviewer. I have viewed more than plays
though. I have viewed my life as a new
college student and as a college writer. As Shakespeare said,
"All the world's a stage, and all the man and women merely players." As
the author of these papers, I am merely a player on the stag of life,
performing as I write. I am playing
to the reader, who is my audience. All
I can do is put forth my best effort, and hope that the audience is pleased
with my performance. And now, on
with the show. Mary Bruinius: When I went in
for my first conference with my professor about that paper, I was nervous
about what he was going to say. I
knew that I desperately needed help with the paper, but I was afraid of
having my work criticized. In high
school I has always thought of myself as a good writer and had never needed
to seek outside help from anyone before, so I was not sure how to act
when I walked into my professor's office and he started making suggestions
on how to improve the paper. I
tried to listen intently during the conference and process everything
that he said, but at the same time I was overwhelmed with how much revising
he was asking me to do. When I left his office that day, I left like
throwing that paper in the trash and starting over. I resisted that temptation and instead let the paper sit on my desk
for a couple of days until I felt up to the challenge of revising it. Allison Schue: "It's like a
one-legged man in a butt kicking contest."
This analogy Dolly Parton uses in the movie "Steel Magnolias" is
a good reference to my writing process.
Writing and I do not go together well; but not to unappetize my
audience, I will tell you that I enjoy trying.
I believe that writing, for anyone, is a skill that is not easily
acquired. Classes like my first-year
seminar, Women in Literature, are good for people like me, the writing
impaired. I greatly enjoyed the class; it pushed my conceptualization
of literary works. I think that
my writing has transformed from a so-so high school book review to the
beginnings of college paper that contain more depth in the analysis. My professor exposed me to new ways of writing
that were so much more fun than the standard five paragraph essay I am
used to. Dr Bashant (Wendy in class)
had us compose poetry, letters, and essays to expand our horizons in literature. Michele James: The first piece I would
like to share is entitled Chimes
of Love because it represents how I learned to use detail with variety
while simultaneously being concise. The
poem describes my reflection of a fond memory.
I found the assignment to be intriguing, for my professor instructed
up to concentrate on a childhood memory that occurred in our kitchen. Closing my eyes I envisioned how light bounced
off the shiny tile floor and how the chestnut hue of the cabinets resembled
bacon. After roaming my imagination
I retold my vivid memory on paper. It
contained numerous short sentences that showed the beginning of a creative
and detailed work of art. I then
proceeded, as told, to remove extraneous ideas and simplify my thoughts.
By this time, I was left with half of what I had started with.
I was flabbergasted. In
high school I had never learned hoe to revise a paper in such a way that
would shoe the concise picture I wanted to paint.
Professor Schlesinger then added an unexpected twist to the assignment. She asked us to transform the paper into a poem.
I found this to be rather fascinating.
A long story has now become a colorful poem. Ryan Keller: I usually take the sculpture approach to my writing. An artist cannot sculpt without clay or some sort of mold in front of them. So I lay out my work word for word and do not stop for punctuation or proper grammar. Just like an artist would do I take the clay, my first draft, and delicately carve away the unwanted pieces and define the sculpture, or paper. My ending product eventually comes out. Starting with a bunch of jumbled words and phrases I revise over and over again each time detailing and sculpting my piece to make a final piece of artwork. I try to encourage people to try it that way. You cannot start a project without a base. |
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